Haiku, Yeah?

A place to read and comment on my Western haiku. It's fun, honest.

Tuesday, March 28, 2006

if x - y2 = 7
why the fuck doesn't
she want me anymore?
punctuation pick
and
choose
showing affection so
she'll suck
my erection
no label but
see fit to
judge others
waiting to say
oh fuck;
me
improving myself
to keep heart
beating
adjust the mask
and step back
into the party
black and
white players on
a sepia pitch
3 lines at
4 a.m. and still
nothing to say