Haiku, Yeah?

A place to read and comment on my Western haiku. It's fun, honest.

Friday, May 12, 2006

I like you
but only because
I don't like myself
"gimme some tongue"
"no"
and I never asked why
my mind
with echoes
remembers the past
an empty coffin
still holds
secrets
heated bubble
a palm, four crescent cuts
staring out the sky
gravel remains
toasted crumbs
tolerable absent regret
scented memory
remember soft embrace
flushed skin and slow warm smiles
violent thoughts and
heart beats
insomnia taunts

Thursday, May 04, 2006

breathe deep
about turn and
try not to 360